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Should i continue?
Yes, i think you should continue!
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Maybe, Its pretty good.
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No, Give up, its horrible!
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ThunderPhoenixia



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PostPosted: Thu Jun 07, 2012 10:06 am    Post subject: Elementia Reply with quote

What do you think of my story so far? And do you ahve any ideas/comments/ suggestions for my story? Tell me in the comments Smile
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PostPosted: Thu Jun 07, 2012 10:20 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

I like it so far Razz
You should probably put in more imagery and line breaks, but it's a good start. Can't wait for more Very Happy
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PostPosted: Thu Jun 07, 2012 6:08 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

It is good, although I think you need to work on the grammar and punctuation.
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PostPosted: Fri Jun 08, 2012 5:45 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Eh, everyone has that issue when they first start off; I was one of the worst, to be honest. It's nothing that can't be fixed. If you want me to edit anything, just shoot me a PM. Coolio?
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PostPosted: Fri Jun 08, 2012 8:34 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Thats true, when I first started writing, my text was just block with no sense of anything and that was 6 years ago.
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