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1st Book in the Cursed Pages Trilogy: White Book

 
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What do you think of it so far?
It's really good. I like it alot.
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With a bit of editing, it'd make a really good book.
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It's all right.
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It's nothing special.
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Not that good of a story.
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You need to improve both the plot and your writing style.
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It's really terrible.
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PostPosted: Mon Sep 20, 2010 3:16 pm    Post subject: 1st Book in the Cursed Pages Trilogy: White Book Reply with quote

Go ahead and say whatever you want, edit it, give criticism. I don't mind, I just want to get to be a better writer Very Happy


So say what you need, ask as many questions as you want, give me any ideas you may have ((although the entire plot has already been planned, I can make adjustments if it's a good enough suggestion)).
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PostPosted: Tue Sep 21, 2010 7:43 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Wow. I really like it so far! Your use of descriptive words is simply fabulous. Very Happy
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PostPosted: Tue Sep 21, 2010 8:00 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Lol, thanks Very Happy

I love playing with words. I'm trying to fit, "gentle weavings of wind and flight" in somewhere, whether it be a poem of White Book.

((oh, and by the way, it's also know as "Brothering the Wolves"))
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